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Tuesday, 3 July 2018

Pigeon + Bus?

Don’t Let the Pigeon Drive the Bus By Mo Willems.

We are learning to write persuasive texts. Use the Wall of Words to help you use interesting vocabulary. Write as the pigeon, the driver or the storyteller. 

21 May~

 I am writing as the pigeon Please let me drive the bus, I promise I won’t crash it into anything. Please, my cousin drives a truck and a bus every single day. PLEASE I have big dreams and one of them is driving the bus. LET ME DRIVE THE BUS. Come I bet your grandmother will let me. I’ll make your room look terrific and there won’t be any dirt on the floor. I really, really, really want to drive the bus, its my biggest dream and if I get to drive the bus it will be all thanks to you. You’ll be my hero. Please just for a minute or two. What if you let me the pigeon drive the bus and I will drive you to wherever you want, please please please. What about we play drive around in a bus and you have to pick a please for us to go. I ‘ll tell everyone that you are charming , kind , caring and lovely please.

  22 May~

 Dear the Bus Driver, I think you should at least let me drive the bus once. I think that everyone should try something that they would like to try because it could be their goal. I would very much like to drive your bus and here are my reasons why. To explain, I think very much that I can drive a bus if I put my head forward to it, I have even started doing drivers test for driving a bus ( My cousin told me everything before I went in) so I think that I am ready to drive the .To put this another way, I now know how to drive a bus plus my cousin gave me a couple of sticks that myself can use to drive the bus. In fact, this is like, what I would like to do when I grow up and now I am all grown up plus I am old enough to have a job. Likewise, this is like a little kid and than they want drive a bus or something else when they grow up, and than when there all grown up they try to make there job come true like I am trying to do here. As a matter of fact I think you should let every adult out there who wants to drive the bus drive a bus, even animals.

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